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Submitted by bruce1337 on Sat, 2008-03-01 20:18.

Please consider this just a rough draft -- it starts abruptly, the structure is unsound, and some transitions are just...meh. BUT, and that's why I'm uploading it, it's quite groovy. Tell me if you agree, and, if possible, drop me some hints for a sound song structure -- it's really not my forte :(

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Tahooey's picture

sounds fun

Submitted by Tahooey on Sun, 2008-03-02 04:59.

kind of mario bros-ish. jump on the mushroom, stomp the dragon, yay! good memories, fun times. maybe it needs some screaming guitar leads on it :)

as for song structure, make up anything you want, thats why music is so awesome! but i think there are standards like

verse verse chorus,
verse verse chorus bridge
verse verse chorus repeat and fade

or you can always do it without the bridge, and say "where's that confounded bridge?!"

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bruce1337's picture

Thanks, man!

Submitted by bruce1337 on Wed, 2008-03-05 19:46.

As simple as it might sound, this'll help. And of course feel free to donate some screaming guitar leads!

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